WESun (Sun Winks) 8/24/14 – Poetry? Give me a break.

Doug’s WESun (SunWinks!) 8/24/14 challenge was to write one good (epigram). Since I don’t get it, I wrote a good poem and one bad poem. Not being a lover of poetry, I decided to do it anyway. Granted, he won’t approve, but I bet I make him laugh.
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A good poem.

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Here’s a really bad poem.
!!!!!
Playing Dodge Swatter

Sitting in my tee
On the patio is me
Then the little demons come
Begging me to play some

Let’s play Dodge Swatter
Come on, play Dodge Swatter

Ten against one
Not fair, I want them gone
They won’t leave me alone
They keep singing their song

Let’s play Dodge Swatter
We want Dodge Swatter

Getting better at the game
Two down, three lame
Reinforcements in
I can’t win

Playing Dodge Swatter
Playing Dodge Swatter

Gull durned flies. *Swat*

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21 thoughts on “WESun (Sun Winks) 8/24/14 – Poetry? Give me a break.

  1. What is this “won’t approve” stuff?? Who do I look like? I’m chuffed you responded and I got a big kick out of your rad poem, and your good poem. I would call this a song or a refrain poem; it’s too long to be an epigram. But so what?? It’s you being fun and creative. What more could I ask for?

  2. Pingback: SunWinks! August 24, 2014: Keeping It Short | Writing Essential Group

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